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What's Your EQ? (E-Mail Quotient)

You're an ACE when it comes to e-mail. Your messages are intelligently crafted, organized, concise, informative. Or, maybe not.

This e-mail contains 10 common errors that weaken the message's effectiveness. How many of these errors can you find? Print this page and mark the e-mail errors. Then, compare the errors you found with the ones we've flagged on the EQ Test Answers and Explanations page. Add up your correct responses to determine your EQ score.

Subject: FYI
Date: 5/24/2004 11:58 EST
From: Lockwood Management
To: Office Managers, Barlow Building
Attached file:

On Tuesday, May 23rd, computer equipment was stolen from Global Mailing, a tenant on the 7th floor. (Global Mailing is the company that gives those legendary Christmas parties with the unforgettable rum punch!) Our security camera recorded a man leaving the building. Apparently the thief entered the unlocked suite, placed the computer in a moving crate and loaded it onto a van parked at the rear loading dock. The Boston Police were contacted and a report was filed. The police informed us that there is a man posing as a professional mover who enters offices, steels computers and other office equipment as well as wallets. The tape with the photo of the suspect is available at the guard's desk. Please stop by and take a look. If you recognize this man, have any information regarding this theft, or if you experience a theft in your suite, please contact us, and the Boston Police. Please remember never to leave your reception area unattended and to screen visitors carefully. Remember to keep your suite doors and desks locked. The attached file is our 30 page manual containing information on security procedures. Please familiarize yourself with the relevant material. BTW, the electricity will be shut off at noon today (May 25) and remain off for two hours for maintenance. If using a computer, take appropriate steps so you won't lose data during this power outage. Scroll down for EQ Response Sheet. EQ Response Sheet Did you find at least 10 errors in the message? List the problems you flagged and explain why they are problems.

Did you catch all ten errors? Check your answers here.